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Why Is Nominalization Wrong?

The hidden verb trap that makes your writing slow and heavy

4 min read Β· Writing Style Β· IELTS / Professional Writing

The short answer

Nominalization means taking a verb β€” an action word β€” and turning it into a noun. Instead of deciding, you β€œmake a decision.” Instead of investigating, you β€œconduct an investigation.” The action is still there β€” but it is buried inside a noun. This makes your sentences longer, heavier, and harder to read.

What does nominalization actually look like?

Here is the simplest way to spot it. In a nominalized sentence, a verb has been turned into a noun β€” usually by adding a suffix like -tion, -ment, -ance, -ence, -al, -ing.

Then the writer needs a weak helper verb to carry it β€” words like make, give, have, do, conduct, carry out, perform, achieve. That combination β€” weak verb + noun β€” is the nominalization trap.

Nominalized (heavy) βœ—

The committee made a decision to delay the project.

With verb (clear) βœ“

The committee decided to delay the project.

πŸ’‘ Saved 2 words. Action is now clear.

Nominalized (heavy) βœ—

The manager gave an explanation for the delay.

With verb (clear) βœ“

The manager explained the delay.

πŸ’‘ Saved 4 words. Shorter and more direct.

Nominalized (heavy) βœ—

We need to carry out an analysis of the data.

With verb (clear) βœ“

We need to analyse the data.

πŸ’‘ Saved 3 words. The verb does the work alone.

Nominalized (heavy) βœ—

They reached an agreement on the new terms.

With verb (clear) βœ“

They agreed on the new terms.

πŸ’‘ Saved 2 words. Cleaner and faster.

Think of it like this

Imagine you want to kick a ball. That is simple β€” one action, one word. Now imagine you say β€œperform the action of making contact with the ball using your foot.” Same action. But buried under layers of extra words. Nominalization is exactly that β€” it wraps a simple action in unnecessary packaging.

How to spot nominalization β€” look for the suffixes

When you see a noun ending with one of these suffixes, ask yourself: is there a simpler verb hiding inside?

-tion

-sion

-ment

-ance

-ence

-al

-ity

-ing (as noun)

-ure

-age

-ness

-ship

Example: consideration (-tion) β†’ verb: consider. Improvement (-ment) β†’ verb: improve.

The master fix list β€” 20 nominalizations and their verb forms

Nominalized (wordy)Verb form (use this)
make a decisiondecide
conduct an investigationinvestigate
give an explanationexplain
reach an agreementagree
make an improvementimprove
carry out an analysisanalyse
provide a descriptiondescribe
make a suggestionsuggest
have a discussiondiscuss
take into considerationconsider
make a recommendationrecommend
show an increaseincrease
achieve a reductionreduce
perform a calculationcalculate
give permissionpermit / allow
make an assumptionassume
have an influence oninfluence
come to a conclusionconclude
give approvalapprove
make a comparisoncompare

When is nominalization actually correct?

Nominalization is not always wrong. There are times when the noun form is the right choice.

βœ“ Nominalization is fine when: When you are talking about the concept, not the action

The investigation took three months. (You are talking about the investigation as a whole thing, not the act of investigating.)

βœ“ Nominalization is fine when: When the noun is the subject of your sentence

Deforestation is one of the leading causes of climate change. (Deforestation is a concept β€” using the verb 'to deforest' here would not work.)

βœ“ Nominalization is fine when: In academic writing when precision matters

The transformation of raw data into usable information is the core task. (Here, the noun form carries specific technical meaning.)

Exam tip β€” IELTS Writing / Professional Writing

IELTS examiners reward grammatical range and accuracy. A sentence with a strong verb shows more grammatical control than the same idea buried in a noun phrase. When you revise your essay, search for β€œmake a”, β€œgive a”, β€œhave a”, β€œdo a”, β€œcarry out a” β€” these are almost always nominalization traps. Replace them with the verb.

πŸ€– AI writing tip

Grammarly Premium and ChatGPT both flag nominalizations under β€œwordy sentences” or β€œhidden verbs.” When you see that suggestion, look for the noun ending in -tion, -ment, -anceand ask: β€œIs there a verb form of this word?” If yes β€” use the verb. Your sentence will be shorter and stronger.

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